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you are so hard to please
though i get down on one knee
give all of me to you
stay with you through and through
in the hopes you'll do the same
you just play more torturous games
i want to know you
i want to please you
but if you don't want me here
i'll leave without a single tear
swallowed by wrath
walk my own path
though i get down on one knee
give all of me to you
stay with you through and through
in the hopes you'll do the same
you just play more torturous games
i want to know you
i want to please you
but if you don't want me here
i'll leave without a single tear
swallowed by wrath
walk my own path
rhyming is lame.
not about homeboi btw
not about homeboi btw
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So I just finished listening to Hallelujah before reading this and a lot of it actually fits into parts of the song. Or it's just that I'm really tired and hallucinating.
Anyways, another good short poem! Not perfect, but nothing ever is. I'd offer advice, but as mentioned above t o o t i r e d. Besides, I don't even know if you want my advice anyways lol
It is good, tho
Anyways, another good short poem! Not perfect, but nothing ever is. I'd offer advice, but as mentioned above t o o t i r e d. Besides, I don't even know if you want my advice anyways lol
It is good, tho